Asgnt 5 Peer Critique(Baron)

Asgnt 5 Peer Critique(Baron) - Chantel Wynter ENG 201...

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Chantel Wynter ENG 201 – Barbara Cole Peer Critique – Baron Kuehlewind Dear Baron, Your paper starts off ok but the Introduction can use a little work. It is not really clear as to what you will be proving, but you did the gist of the assignment which was to relate your research to the idea of what is a “typical American”. I like how you do try to give a definition on what it is according to your view point but, you didn’t clearly elaborate on it. Also your intro is awfully short to be writing a research paper where you basically had to set up what it is you will be writing and proving throughout your essay. Another major thing is I couldn’t find a thesis which is trouble (trust me I know). You start your intro with the sentence “The notion of a “typical American” has been discussed for over a hundred years” which can be a bit misleading because over a hundred years can signify any amount. Your next sentence where you say “This
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Asgnt 5 Peer Critique(Baron) - Chantel Wynter ENG 201...

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