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Unformatted text preview: this out to me when you underlined it on my first draft. I didn’t understand what he line meant until I went back through another reread of my essay and saw that this is exactly what I was basing my essay around and not my originally thought about thesis. Automatically I knew this was the problem and I knew I had to gear my introduction and essay more around this thesis and not end up with the same mistake as the last essay in order to make this essay better. This paper as a whole has showed me that although one can fight for the same thing the effectiveness of their message is dependant upon the audience that they direct it to. One person may not be able to reach the same person as another in a different position can. I feel fairly good about this paper but I really am not completely sure because the opposite seems to always occur when I’m certain about something, but now that’s up to you to judge. Sincerely, Chantel Wynter...
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This essay was uploaded on 04/11/2008 for the course ENG 101 taught by Professor Stanish during the Fall '07 term at SUNY Buffalo.
- Fall '07