Nick Letter - Bobby Moran Letter to Peer Anthony Dear...

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Bobby Moran Letter to Peer ( Anthony) Dear Anthony, Money and sports is a very controversial topic today in the United States. The argument you chose was an economical one, which, to me, seems like the right argument to choose when arguing sports. Today sports are not just a game it is a very intense business world. Money is the main motivator of sports now. Throughout the essay you point out a good amount of factual numbers that all defend your argument. There were a few issues with the essay, such as small spelling mistakes but all that can easily be fixed with copy editing, or peer review. There were many ways your essay was very effective. By showing how owners raise money the reader gets a feel for all the ways money can be brought in. You seem to have an in depth knowledge of the subject and it shows in the essay. You are very objective in your essay; where many people tend to become subjective and pick a side, you simply just state the facts. At the same time you tell how money has created issues in sports and now sports are no longer just
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This note was uploaded on 04/16/2008 for the course ENGLISH 112 taught by Professor Cohen during the Fall '08 term at UMass (Amherst).

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