Unformatted text preview: considered the fact that something as simple as sentence variation could dramatically change an essay. Another element I need to change in my essay writing is setting the scene better. I failed to create a scene that the reader could get lost in. Also, I need to incorporate shorter sentences into the mix. Otherwise my sentences become long and mundane. Another way to enhance my writing is to maintain a central idea from beginning to end instead of digressing all the time. This digression sometimes leads to confusion rather than the intended scene and mood changes. Overall, I need to work much harder on the mechanics of my future essays in order for them to become successful....
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- Winter '05
- Writing, Shaun Greenhalgh English, Shaun Greenhalgh