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Boussayri 1Assil BoussayriDr. Rusty SpellENG 132.03March 2nd 2021Peer Review 3Keiana Johnson, in one word, impressive is the first word that comes to mind havingread your essay on The Black Panther. I give credit where it is due. However, I noticed somemistakes here and there that I’m hoping you can improve on.Redundancy. “You have to actually pay attention to the movie to understand how itimplies to this,” In your fourth sentence, I noticed too much repetition in the use of the word“to”. Without redundancy, your sentence would have read something like “You have beattentive enough for you to understand how it implies to this”. From the sentence, there’s alsothe use of the word “actually”, which I find unnecessary. This may make your paper toowordy but not passing the intended message.I recommend you make use of free online tools, such as,.By this, you will be able to improve on your grammar. Repetition goes unnoticed in the last
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Term
Spring
Professor
Lucielle Banks
Tags
Writing, Debut albums, Time 100

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