Robert Treyes UCI Tech Writing 2:00-3:20 Memorandum Date: March 11, 2008 To: UCI Tech Students From: Robert Treyes RE: Four Rules from The Elements of Style This memo will evaluate the group presentations given in class. There were a total of 5 groups and they each presented a survey or an experiment they conducted. The evaluations will go over each group’s intro, organization, presentation, visuals and conclusions. Group 1: Physical Exercise Overall this group did a good job and their survey was very interesting. They wanted to see if people were getting enough exercise. Their intro was a little slow and the person talking kept saying ‘uhh’ over and over again. That was a little distracting, and took away from the presentation. Also it was a little distracting that they read off their slides rather than knowing their topic. Overall their conclusion was correct as they found people were not getting enough exercise. Group 2: Students too Busy for News
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