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Brown 1 Robert C Brown Jr English 101 L02 Spring 2007 Professor Van Epps February 19, 2007 Essay 2 Rough Draft Number 12 Use examples to persuade your reader  that athletics have (or have not) assumed excessive importance in this  country.  Robert, This is much improved.  Of course, there are still some suggestions. Good  luck with this.  Carol Why Athletics Are So Important In This Country While watching the weekend evening news, a special report dealing with  the special treatment that athletes receive aired. It seems that athletics play an  unusually important part in our country, due more to money and prestige  then Check the spelling of the word that you used here.   physical fitness. After  reflecting on our country’s athletic history, it’s  Make sure to use the full word and  not the contraction.   easy to understand why there is an excessive amount of  importance placed on athletics. 
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Brown 2 Since the beginning of time, athletes have been shown special treatment. 
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