Unformatted text preview: when some of these events took place. I also liked how Montana brought his story full circle to the beginning explaining that he had a heart attack and that that moment changed everything for him. That in one moment he fully understood clearly what he had to do to get his life back into shape. While he did have many good points in his speech he was weak in some areas. He looked down at his card frequently it seemed, as if he hadn’t rehearsed as much as he would have liked to. He also at times stumbled over a few words which I thought took away from the dramatic nature of the speech. Overall though I thought that Montana Kellmer’s speech “Moving Forward” was a good example of what a storytelling speech should look like....
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- Fall '07
- English-language films, heart attack, Montana Kellmer, Noah Snyder Section, Speech Critique Overall