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Unformatted text preview: writing a ridiculously long paper, so, I just marked them down on your draft and will give you the draft on Monday when I get back. I also made some wording suggestions in some confusing parts. I think I would like to see you give Brian a little bit more of a background so that he can be one of your main characters. Also, if you are striving to add more of a main character feel to your paper, dont be afraid to describe yourself! Right after your introduction you could slip in a little paragraph about what makes you like horror or action and stuff. Overall, I thought your paper was put together very well. Of course you will take it back and reread it and make tons of changes to things that you dont like, but I think you have a good foundation for a great story! And by the way, good luck with your REAL story! Kylie Revelle...
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This essay was uploaded on 04/17/2008 for the course CORE, MATH 110 taught by Professor Scanelle during the Spring '08 term at Valparaiso.
- Spring '08