Letter to Garrett - In your paper there are very few...

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Letter to Garrett From Nathan Your paper told your story very well. However that is what most of it is just the story leading up to when you felt that love from your friend. I think that you could go on to talk about what happened after he picked you up and tell what this event did to your friendship after word. If you did this then you would also be able to make your paper a little longer plus you wouldn’t have to change much if any of the core of your paper.
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Unformatted text preview: In your paper there are very few changes that you need to make and they are small things like you used is when you meant to use it other then this things your paper is well done. It makes a reader feel like they are there as a part of your story. You do a good job of telling the setting that you were in....
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This essay was uploaded on 04/17/2008 for the course CORE, MATH 110 taught by Professor Scanelle during the Spring '08 term at Valparaiso.

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