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Reviewed Paper: ntp1384635 - Tue Jan 25 22:37:31 EST 2022
Paper Title: HB UA:1 Q5 essay #3
No. of Pages: 1
Paper Style: MLA Paper Type: Persuasive/Argumentative
Taken English? Yes English as Second Language? No
Feedback Areas: Focus/Thesis Statement, Transitions & Fluency
Paper Goals: Hello! I added more instructions and details in the actual submission in the
headline of the essay. In short, I had to write an essay arguing which health care
system is better in terms of economics, the US or the UK. Thank you!
Review Summary:
Hello Iva,
My name is Maria and I reviewed your paper today.
I left comments for you to review on the introduction, topic development,
references, and formatting.
Please remember to follow the points for the assignment as listed.
Thank you for using NetTutor!
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Reviewed Paper: ntp1384635 - Tue Jan 25 22:37:31 EST 2022
I recommend rewriting this topic sentence for
clarity. A strong topic sentence introduces the
subject of the paragraph and connects the
paragraph to the main subject of the paper.