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Student 1 AssessmentThe work is good but has limited insight into the discussion requirement. The studentdemonstrates a good understanding of the use of fiction in the article by Neil Gaiman and haseven gone further to provide external sources supporting Gaiman's views on the use of fiction.However, the student fails to describe or discuss their reaction to the use of fiction in the article,thereby failing to answer the discussion assignment. The work primarily explores and analyzesthe use of fiction as per the article and not their reaction. The work's grammar is good, with agrammatical rating of 97%. It has grammatical errors, which include; use of wrong noun form,"essays "instead of essay in the first line of the first paragraph, and “will” instead of “would” inthe second sentence of the first paragraph. Also, it has an incorrect preposition (attention oninstead of attention to) on the first sentence, first paragraph. On originality, it has 38% similarityprimarily because of the heavy use of direct quotation in the presentation. Also, even though thework is referenced correctly, the in-text citations are not well-formed (the student uses the format

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Term
Summer
Professor
Dr.Ateng'
Tags
Grammar, 10, 7, 90, 38, Neil Gaiman

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