Essay - The first essay had him singing the Oscar Mayer...

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Josh Emerson English 1105 11/13/07 The two essays were very similar but small changes in wording and the addition of paragraphs made them different. The first essay was much shorter in length and was much funnier. The second one was shorter and had a more serious tone too it. The second one also talked a lot more about his dad and seemed more oriented towards how his dad felt about music than himself. The second essay was oriented around other people rather than talking about himself. He talked not only about his dad but his teacher Mr. Mancini. In the first essay he left out the whole part about naming the guitar with Mr. Mancini, and giving it a sex and everything. Another major difference between the two essays is the tone they both had. The first one was much funnier. While the second one was more serious.
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Unformatted text preview: The first essay had him singing the Oscar Mayer theme song to his teacher, while the second one had him singing the Chevrolet theme song. The Oscar Mayer song is much funnier and lightens the mood, and the Chevrolet song is more serious and keeps the serious tone in the essay. I think that he changed the essay to make it more serious and more about his whole experience with music. Not only about him but everyone in his life. The first one was funny and about his experience but I think he wanted to show that there was a lot more influence and events that shaped his view of music from the people around him. So he included everyone that affected his view of music. This in turn made it more serious and about his whole experience with music....
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