I really did better on this assignment than I had planned

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I really did better on this assignment than I had planned. I am not very good at writing essays. I think one main area of concern with me is the length of my paragraphs. My paragraphs were short. It was stated that paragraphs should be at least five to six sentences. This is something that I will keep in mind when writing my next essay. I also forgot to indent my paragraphs. This was just a common mistake for me because that is something that I earned earlier in school that all paragraphs must be indented. My introduction was short as well. I stated my thesis, but did not go in to detail to support my thesis in my opening paragraph. I had this same problem with my conclusion. I only had one sentence for my conclusion and it should be a whole paragraph which is five to six sentences.
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Unformatted text preview: My reference page had many misTakes. I will u±lize The sample essay we were provided wiTh To learn how To properly seT up my reference page. I will also use references from The apus library because They give you The ciTa±ons To puT on your reference page already formated. ²haT will save ±me, as well as e helpful as far as a good source for informa±on. My oTher misTakes were jusT common grammar misTakes. If I had Took more ±me and proofread more Than once, I would have been able To correcT These on my own. So ThaT is someThing I will incorporaTe also. I will proofread my essay more Than once, and also have someone else proofread iT for me. If I u±lize These ±ps, I should be able To wriTe a greaT essay....
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  • Fall '13
  • PennyFreeland
  • Writing, APUS Library, reference page

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