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1. Review the prompt from question one from the 2011 AP Language and Composition Exam.
A. What is the prompt asking you to do?
i.
“Synthesize information from at least three of the sources and incorporate it
into a coherent, well-developed essay that identifies the key issues
associated with the locavore movement and examines their implications for
the community.”
B. Did you address all parts of the prompt?
i.
I believe that I addressed all parts of the prompt in my essay.
C. Did you stray from the topic?
i.
My essay stayed focused, but used examples that related to it topic.
D. Is prompt dissection a strength or weakness for you?
i. Prompt dissection is a strength for me.
E. How could you improve this skill?
i. I could annotate the prompt to ensure that I fully understand what it is asking.
2. Read and evaluate your previously written essay response.
Criteria Your Evaluation
Evidence from Your
Essay
Use What You Have
Learned In Order to
Grow
Claim Is the claim clear?
Does your claim take
a stance that shows
evidence of simple or
complex thinking?
My claim is clear, but it
only shows simple
thinking.
Copy your claim here:
“There are many
benefits to being a
locavore.”
Write an updated,
improved claim here:
Locavores contribute
to the growth of their
community’s economy
and the quality of food.