pageantsarehardwork - Introductory Paragraph Hard work is the most important thing in a young person's life This being the final question for the Miss

pageantsarehardwork - Introductory Paragraph Hard work is...

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Introductory Paragraph: Hard work is the most important thing in a young person's life. This being the final question for the Miss California pageant, many girls answered with very obvious and heart felt responses, but not I. The judges determine the winner of the scholarship by the way this question is answered, and crown the most deserving girl. The winner of the show is automatically qualified to go to the miss USA, and if a winner there, must go onto miss universe. it all comes down to the final question given to the contestant at the finale of the pageant, in front of hundreds of people, with no preparation whatsoever. Introduce subject: Hard work Gain reader's attention: You may not be the smartest, the fastest, the strongest, the bravest, or the prettiest, but you can get anywhere you want if you have determination, perseverance, and hardwork. State thesis in the last sentence of the introduction: ultimately, in my opinion hard work is what is most important to have as a young person, beside other answers like for example, kindness, confidence, and scholastics. First Body Paragraph: Even just getting here to this moment on the stage of miss California, what it took the most was hard work. Topic sentence (with controlling idea that supports the thesis): All together is was an event that took 2,000 dollars out of me. Less general sentence proving topic sentence: I am not rich; I have 3 jobs plus my side jobs that made it possible for me to pay the fee to be in this show. Specific support for A: I printed out 200 sponsorship letters and delivered them to all the staffulty of my school, and businesses of Fontana, Rialto, and Bloomington.
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