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Unformatted text preview: my paper was getting to a better point. I also added in and took out a few of my sentences. A few of them didnt go together and needed something more and a few of the sentences didnt fit at all. I also added in better transitioning before paragraphs because I felt as though I was just jumping from point to point with no goal in mind. This helped my paper develop a better base. In my first draft I also didnt include any reference to pop culture or psychology which is very important to this essay, it is the prompt. So, I added that in to my conclusion and how Fincher (the director) used psychology and pop culture to cultivate the film I have been analyzing....
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This note was uploaded on 04/23/2008 for the course WRIT 2 taught by Professor Gahan during the Winter '08 term at UCSB.
- Winter '08