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Unformatted text preview: 3. Shift new information to the right-and complex info Devices: 1. Passives-if the subject is the most important 2. There-allows you to emphasize 3. What-shift- shifts important stuff to the right 4. It-shift- can introduce 5. Not only, But-emphasizes the latter 6. Pronoun substitution- redundancy can seem flat Topics, Emphasis, Themes, and Coherence-Stressed the right things creates coherence-Repeat your topics as subjects-Repeat them as well elsewhere as nouns, verbs and adjectives-Make sure your topic sentence is identifiable and sets of coherence to the rest of the paragraph, especially if it is long...
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- Spring '08