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Name: Lily PenaGeneral Purpose:To PersuadeOutcome Statement:I would like to persuade my audience into loving oneselfs for who they are.AttentionShe is tall curvy with a tiny waist and big breast, she has the most beautiful hair with the clearest skin, kind of like a Barbie doll figure. This is the ideal “perfect body” for a women. At least that’s every females thoughts, and sadly the women that don’t have this body appearance tend to hate themselves for not having what they picture as a perfect body. Central Claim: now I wanted to pursue you on why you should love yourself for who you are not for who you think you should be or even look. Transitional Statement:every women is beautiful in her own unique way. The key to seeing this is self-confidence and love in yourself. NeedI.I’m sure you have all heard that saying “you must learn to love yourself before you can love anyone else.” A.Well, have you ever just felt so uncomfortable with your own self that the thoughtruns through your mind “no one will ever want me?” you feel as to your not ever going to be pretty enough, skinny, tall enough or you just feel like you will never be someone’s idea of perfection. II.According to National Institute on Media and the family (n.d) that at the age of thirteen, 53% of girls are unhappy with their bodies. This grows to 78% by the time girls reach seventeen. A.Because woman are so busy trying to achieve that perfect body figure a lot of them tend to become so overwhelmed with it that they began to hurt their body bynot taking in the right amount of foods, nutrition and vitamins which leads to medical issues. B.With that being said an estimated one thousand woman die each year from anorexia nervosa. As well as one in every ten college girls suffer from anorexia orbulimia. III.How do we prevent these kind of sad things from happening? A.Well there is many ways you can take action. Transitional Statement: instead of woman bringing down someone because of their body