review of peer

review of peer - line 6 “but(for everything I think of is...

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The fact that many words were repeated and not just the main word, list, made this poem very  flowing.  There was also a rhyming aspect that was continued from beginning to end which  helped keep the poem continuous.  In my opinion this poem could be streamlined a bit by  taking out some of the “extra” words, such as: line 2-  “ for I do not know, how (the right) words should flow”
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Unformatted text preview: line 6- “but (for) everything I think of, is so cheesy” I'm kinda glad that I wasn't the only one who had troubles with writing this poem, which was a pleasant surprise for me. I definitely agree with the author when I say that the last line is by far the best. Really there a just a few places in the middle where improvements could be made and, of course, that is just my opinion....
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This note was uploaded on 04/29/2008 for the course REL 100 taught by Professor Depends during the Spring '08 term at Augsburg.

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