Unformatted text preview: which resulted in an improved paper. For example, my peer review partner Debbie Alvarez, advised me to include more analysis of my sources. Max Bagen told me to include more parenthetical citations. I had many grammatical errors which I corrected, and I followed my peers’ advice which increased my paper length by almost three quarters of a page. I have the deepest feeling in my heart that my paper has greatly improved in many respects. I am very appreciative of peer review because it helps the one writing the paper evaluate and improve it based on another student’s perspective. This process should be employed in many other courses besides Human Sexuality and Culture....
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- Fall '08
- Parenthetical referencing, Teaching assistant, Rachel Harvey, Human Sexuality and Culture