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Unformatted text preview: Basically, I started with very specific errors and then I slowly went more general. Essay 2 There was a lot of information to deal with in the second essay and so the toughest part of writing it was integrating the two subjects of promotion and cultural values. In my original draft there wasn’t much flow between sentences and paragraphs and a lot of these parts had to be moved around. It was also a challenge to properly incorporate quotes from some of the readings. Revising the second draft was a long process and was almost as long as writing the essay from scratch. This time I started by rearranging the sentences in each paragraph so there would be more flow in reading. Then I went on to correct all the little details. I also had to add quotes to the essay which was my final step in the process....
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- Spring '04
- Writing, Passive voice, Prof. Shaffer, Mrigender Virk, Prof. Shaffer Essay