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Unformatted text preview: would work better and help diversify it. Coming Home I think that everyone away from home can identify well with this poem. This does a good job of pointing out the things in the room, but I think it would make it more personal if you perhaps described some of the more personal things in it that make it yours, that only you would notice and remember. Also, any changes that may have bothered you or come to your attention since you left would help make the fact that youve been away more important and noticeable. Other than that, I like the language and the short line that continues the poem....
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- Spring '08