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165_final_assignment_-_option_1 - To Professor Snow...

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Unformatted text preview: To: Professor Snow, Managerial Communications Professor From: Paul A. Skerry, Managerial Communications Student Date: May 05, 2008 Subject: Evaluation of my Communication Growth and the 165 Course As the semester draws to a closeWhos doing what first..”You have challenged us to reflect on our experiences..blah blah blah” This shouldn’t be in your opening…I wouldn’t be so specific so soon I would like to demonstrate… Should all these words be in caps?..same for all these What about them? What about them? Distracting from what? Such as? Don’t lie..i know you knew this before haha. Possibly give an example from one of your assignments I think this is hyphenated? What do you mean by jumbled? Give example from your writing Such as? Maybe give an example of the revised sentence What problem? There weren’t any Friday review sessions..im confused. Do you mean more PWC sessions? In addition, Such as phrasing (or whatever) what concepts? “concepts such as…” jus repeat wat u said basically. Put this at the very beginning of the oral presentation section if this is your main point The presentations , you have challenged us to reflect on our experiences in Managerial Communications. I felt that throughout this semester I have taken advantage of the resources available to me and have improved my writing significantly. For exampleWhos doing what first..”You have challenged us to reflect on our experiences..blah blah blah” This shouldn’t be in your opening…I wouldn’t be so specific so soon I would like to demonstrate… Should all these words be in caps?..same for all these What about them? What about them? Distracting from what? Such as? Don’t lie..i know you knew this before haha. Possibly give an example from one of your assignments I think this is hyphenated? What do you mean by jumbled? Give example from your writing Such as? Maybe give an example of the revised sentence What problem? There weren’t any Friday review sessions..im confused. Do you mean more PWC sessions? In addition, Such as phrasing (or whatever) what concepts? “concepts such as…” jus repeat wat u said basically. Put this at the very beginning of the oral presentation section if this is your main point The presentations , during my first tutorial, you mentioned to me that my writing was “below average” compared to my fellow students. My final submission of the Lee Quimby assignment resulted in the comment that it was my “strongest piece yet.” To demonstrate how Whos doing what first..”You have challenged us to reflect on our experiences..blah blah blah” This shouldn’t be in your opening…I wouldn’t be so specific so soon I would like to demonstrate… Should all these words be in caps?..same for all these What about them?...
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  • Fall '06
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  • Writer, sa id basica, Friday review sessions..im, experiences..blah blah blah, hat concep ts, oral presentation section

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