Unformatted text preview: the apotheosis of human inefficiency.” (Randall 21), and that the establishment is “In a word, inefficient.” (Randall 22). Overall, Randall’s ethical appeal is solid and genuine, instilling a feeling of confidence in his abilities and qualifications in the reader. Topic sentence Blue- Shared Experiences Green- Opposing Viewpoints Orange- Flaws Conclusionary sentence 1) To me, it feels like the “Put your most complex point last” schema is being utilized here. I feel that flaws in one’s own argument is the hardest to admit, yet it is done regardless. 2) I feel that the relationship between the points are easily understood as they are....
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- Fall '07
- English, Randall, Bryan Simmons English, Flaws Conclusionary sentence, PA9 Organizational Workshop