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October 1, 2007 Anthro 200, Section 5 Assignment 7 “Editing the Works of Sprenger and Postert” Dear Mr. Guido Sprenger, I would like to present you with my analysis of your article, “Encompassment and its Discontents: The Rmeet and the Lowland of Lao.” First of all, the opening section of your article is slightly confusing. I found it hard to understand precisely your purpose for writing until I came to the last few paragraphs which detailed, much too briefly, your idea of reforming the model of the grammars. I like your new take on the grammars system, but I think you should present this earlier in your paper so your readers can look for evidence of how you show this. If you advance this idea in the beginning as your main idea, readers will be able to focus on this throughout your paper. You cannot save the argument which appears to be a crucial aspect of your paper until the last couple of paragraphs. Furthermore, you say that you want to restructure every grammar so that it
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This note was uploaded on 06/17/2008 for the course ANTHR 1420 taught by Professor Fiskesjo,m during the Fall '06 term at Cornell University (Engineering School).

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