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Checking for CoherenceThe draft body paragraph below is not coherent. Read the thesis statement and thebody paragraph, and answer the following questions.Essay Thesis: Playing Wii Fit games is a fun and effective means of improving physicalactivity, socialization, and problem-solving skills.Body Paragraph:The new Wii Fit games are some of the most popular video games available today. I lovethem! They encourage physical activity. They aren’t as tedious as some more formalexercise programs. Players must move the controllers, in order to move their on-screencharacters. Players use with full arm and body movements to operate the controllers andmove their on-screen characters. The movements required to simulate bowling or tennis,for example, closely match the movements involved in these real-life activities. You don’t
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