3.07 Revising the Narrative Essay - Part Four Directions Choose one passage(200-250 words of your narrative essay to rewrite adding descriptive language

3.07 Revising the Narrative Essay - Part Four Directions...

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Part Four Directions: Choose one passage (200-250 words) of your narrative essay to rewrite, adding descriptive language and sensory details wherever possible. Highlight your revisions. Submissions without highlighting will be returned for revisions. Once I walked out of the party, I felt that I needed to cry but no tears would come. Instead, I knew that I needed to plot a way to get back at Fortunado. I had told him that no one else could know our secret. This was an awful secret about me that had the potential to ruin my life. But, I thought that Fortunado was a good close friend that would never tell a secret this bad to anyone else. Apparently, I had thought wrong about him and now wanted revenge. After thinking for
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Unformatted text preview: what seemed like hours about what to do to Fortunado, I finally thought of something. I had plotted to kill Fortunado at a party similar to the one he had betrayed me at. I was going to invite all of my friends to this party and kill Fortunado. He had hurt and betrayed me very much for what he had done . I had to re-think my plan at first, as I thought that maybe killing him would be a little too extreme. But, he betrayed me and ended up costing me my job. I had to lose my job just because he could not keep something secret, like good friends are supposed to. I knew that killing him at a party like the one he had betrayed me at would be the perfect way to get revenge on him....
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  • Fall '16
  • Brent LeDrew
  • English, English-language films, Debut albums, Fortunado, good close friend

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