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Unformatted text preview: not work in the paper is the way she skips from topic to topic within one entry. She loses focus frequently, and will add facts that could either be completely omitted or worked into the essay differently. Ultimately, Kotharis essay was strong when it came to vocabulary and basic set up, but lacked the ability to focus the true intentions of writing her story in the first place....
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This note was uploaded on 09/09/2008 for the course ENGLWRIT 112 taught by Professor Mccord during the Fall '08 term at UMass (Amherst).
- Fall '08