Unformatted text preview: not work in the paper is the way she skips from topic to topic within one entry. She loses focus frequently, and will add facts that could either be completely omitted or worked into the essay differently. Ultimately, Kothari’s essay was strong when it came to vocabulary and basic set up, but lacked the ability to focus the true intentions of writing her story in the first place....
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- Fall '08
- Writing, Short story, Kothari, Krista Morelli Englwrit