Revising Emails Assignment

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Running head: REVISING EMAILS AND CONTACTS 1 Revising Emails and Contacts Private Eng/135 November 23rd, 2015 Christopher Beyers
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REVISING EMAILS AND CONTACTS 2 Revising Emails and Contacts Objective #1: Complete the Level 3: Document Critique in Ch. 6 of the text. Use the Comments and Track Changes features in Microsoft ® Word to make corrections. Original: TO: George Kimball < [email protected] > CC: SUBJECT: My trip back East Dear George: I went back to New York for apresentation the 15th of this month and I found it very informative. The sponsor of my visat was Vern Grouper. Vern is the Manager of IS at headquarters; that is, their centralized information systems operation. They’ve got quite a bit of power out there. And they do encourage us to utilize their capibilities, there services, and experiences to whatever extent will be beneficial to us. However, you could say it would be my observation that although they have a tremendous amount of computing capability that capability is directed toward a business dimension very different than ours and unlike anything we have. However, their are certain services that might be performed in our behalf by headquarters. For example, we could utilize people such as Vern to come and address our IS advisory group since I am planning on convening that group on a monthly basis.
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  • Spring '14
  • angelaoleson
  • It, Podcasting, Vern, Vern Grouper, information systems operation

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