Peters-SelfReflectiveLetter

Peters-SelfReflectiveLetter - 6th August 2008 Dear...

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6 th August 2008 Dear Portfolio Reader, A wintery chill while I walked into the classroom. We sat there for five minutes before the tall teacher came into the below zero class. My first impression was a free spirited writer with a plethora of knowledge. I was correct. Kimberlee Peters walked into the room doing her normal stride that looks like a dance move from the beat generation. The thing I was worried about is how she would grade our writing. After our first assignment about our name and also the first in class essay, I found out that our papers weren’t officially “graded” they were just commented on with notes and waited for our revision to put into our portfolios which never happened in high school. Back in high school, my essays usually contained a lot of weak verbs while also my works won’t be as cohesive as I would want them to be. They would tend to stray off topic and not flow from paragraph to paragraph. The IPWS class has improved my writing abilities by showing me other ways to state things and using show vs. tell and
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