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Intro to Journalism Length: 255 44/B+ This was a really good job, but you have a lot of silly errors and missing punctuation. Also, in your second graf, you needed to explain that they blew through a traffic stop BEFORE colliding with the car. If you picture what you wrote, the reader cannot see how/why the collision occurred. Two police officers were fired Thursday, after lying about the details regarding their involvement in an automobile collision last August in Statesboro. Officer Kevin Barlow and Sgt. Wesley Zozuli were responding to a burglary in progress. At the corner of Vine St. and Lake Blvd, they collided with a car. In their initial report, they said they had come to a complete stop. However, the two lied in their initial report and continue to lie during the subsequent questioning said The Chief of Police, Martin Guidemi Although no one was injured in the collision, both vehicles were destroyed. After further
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