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To: Ana Maysonet-Perez From: Ryan Mantz Date: February 5, 2017 Subject: Peer evaluation of resume The purpose of the memo is to make some suggestions towards making your peer’s resume better. Wording You start off most of your sentences with good eye popping words. There are defiantly better words you could be using for some of your sentences. For example, instead of saying “approaching and serving” you could say something like “provided exceptional service” and then say the rest. Your wording will defiantly spice up your resume up a lot. Your sentences are vague in some areas. Try not to use the same word twice, its always good to get creative but stay professional. Some of the best words to use would be like planned, distributed, Communicated, compiled etc. Make sure your sentences are about stuff you have completed and not just statements. Experience You’re definitely lacking with experience in the work force but putting skills on there that you know is great for right now. I would defiantly get rid of skills and coarse work as you gain more
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