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evaluation - -1Evaluation of Two Student Essays Roommates...

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-1 Evaluation of Two Student Essays Roommates From Hell 1) Main Issue  Karla is having issues with her two roommates Jenna and Farah. They  steal her water bottles, they borrow her clothes without permission and return  them  smelling of sweat and cigarettes , they put her down, are rude to her  friends, use her hair brush, and on top of that go into her room to use her laptop.  With her  roommates constantly doing these things to her, all Karla does is let it  slide because she doesn’t have the guts to tell them off. 2) Message  Karla’s message in this essay would be that you need to find a way to  communicate or as she would say, stick up for yourself if people are completely  taking advantage of you or disrespecting you. Staying quiet and letting people  walk all over you won’t solve anything and people will continue to walk all over  you if you let them. 3) Reader’s Response I completely agree with how Karla must have felt, and I could probably say  most people would agree as well. I liked this essay mostly because it’s probably  something most people can relate to whether you have dealt with this problem  before with either your siblings, roommates like Karla’s, co-workers, parents,  friends etc. I can list so many instances where either of my brothers have taken  things from my room without asking and it bothers me so much. My mom does it  as well. She’s always taking my laptop to use it or my hair iron which is super 
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This note was uploaded on 10/28/2008 for the course ENC 1101 taught by Professor Kurner during the Fall '08 term at FIU.

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