Essay Structure Example - Columbine Comparison and Analysis Essay Intro(Insert spicy topic sentence Can be an anecdote personal political literary

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Unformatted text preview: Columbine​ ​Comparison​ ​and​ ​Analysis​ ​Essay Intro:​​ ​(Insert​ ​spicy​ ​topic​ ​sentence.​ ​Can​ ​be​ ​an​ ​anecdote:​ ​personal,​ ​political,​ ​literary,​ ​movies,​ ​tv shows,​ ​poems,​ ​video​ ​games,​ ​people) Thesis​:​ ​At​ ​the​ ​end​ ​of​ ​the​ ​intro,​ ​avoid​ ​saying​ ​“the​ ​author​ ​uses”​ ​ ​or​ ​any​ ​synonym​ ​of​ ​“uses”​ ​ ​David Cullen’s​ ​exclusive​ ​usage​ ​of​ ​diction​ ​and​ ​repetition​ ​creates​ ​a​ ​distinct​ ​tone​ ​of​ ​each​ ​boy​ ​in​ ​order​ ​to help​ ​his​ ​readers​ ​reach​ ​a​ ​conclusion​ ​about​ ​the​ ​boys​ ​and​ ​what​ ​they​ ​did. Rhetorical​ ​Tools:​ ​Diction​ ​(word​ ​choice),​ ​Syntax​ ​(sentence​ ​structure),​ ​Tone,​ ​Repetition Body​ ​1:​ ​Diction​ ​(love​ ​v.​ ​hate) Body​ ​2:​ ​Tone​ ​(pity​ ​v.​ ​manipulative) Body​ ​3:​ ​Repetition​ ​(dylan​ ​looked​ ​up​ ​to​ ​eric, Quotes:​​ ​avoid​ ​summarizing,​ ​“unpack”,​ ​explain,​ ​analyze.​ ​What​ ​is​ ​the​ ​purpose?​ ​Why​ ​did​ ​the author​ ​chose​ ​to​ ​do​ ​this? Blending​ ​Quotes​:​ ​In​ ​their​ ​youth,​ ​the​ ​adults​ ​of​ ​today’s​ ​society​ ​had​ ​also​ ​developed​ ​a​ ​strong recognition​ ​of​ ​gender​ ​roles,​ ​which​ ​are​ ​“sets​ ​of​ ​personality​ ​traits​ ​that​ ​distinguish​ ​males​ ​and females”​ ​(Norland). Conclusion:​ ​Repeat​ ​intro,​ ​tie​ ​back​ ​to​ ​anecdote.​ ​Rephrase​ ​thesis. AVOID:​ ​In​ ​the​ ​book​ ​“Columbine”​ ​by​ ​David​ ​Cullen,​ ​the​ ​word​ ​“uses”​ ​or​ ​any​ ​synonyms,​ ​“since the​ ​beginning​ ​of​ ​time”​ ​or​ ​anything​ ​like​ ​that,​ ​generalizations,​ ​fallacies​ ​(if​ ​you​ ​can’t​ ​prove​ ​it,​ ​don’t say​ ​it),​ ​summary,​ ​not​ ​explaining​ ​quotes,​ ​quotes​ ​that​ ​are​ ​too​ ​long,​ ​keep​ ​emotions​ ​out​ ​of​ ​it,​ ​use your​ ​ENTIRE​ ​time​ ​during​ ​timed​ ​write. ...
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