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Argumentative Essay Peer Review 1. What has the author done well in this draft? Let the author know what you admire about the essay. I like the idea of how one can find his/her own voice by both accepting and rejecting the community/culture that he/she is born into. By accepting, you will understand who you are; by rejecting, you will aim to a brighter future. 2. How clearly does the author’s thesis emerge in Part 1? Is that thesis responding to the main question, “How ought we to cultivate ourselves?”? What can the author do to strengthen his or her thesis? The thesis was clear, and it was fairly relevant to the question. And the connection between community, culture, and self-awareness was quite interesting. 3. How well does the evidence presented in Part 1 support the thesis? How can the author make that evidence more relevant, comprehensive, and persuasive? I know this is due to imitation. But much of it sounds like unnecessary repetition plus a life example. I believe that the essay would be better if it is more logically structured, and from what
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