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Dear Roy, Great job! I thought your essay was written on an extremely interesting and  controversial topic. Overall, I knew what your argument was, and your evidence  supporting it was pretty concrete. I also really liked how you consistently stated your  argument about the labeling of GMOs throughout your essay so the reader was constantly reminded about why the evidence supports your argument. Additionally, I thought your  first paragraph on page 5 was a great addition, because it kind of acts like a  counterargument, and strengthens the reason why food products should not have GMO  labels. Finally, mentioning that society should focus on consumer education was a great  way to end your piece. It gives the reader an alternative to GMO labeling and helps  support your argument that these labels are useless. 
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