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Weaknesses and Opportunities for Improvement of the Letter Write in complete sentences. Complete at least two rows for each category. Submit this form. Element Areas of weakness Opportunities for impr Element 1 Audience, Focus, and Purpose 1.Target audience does not know why they are getting this letter. Letter should start with the shut- 2. Audience doesn’t need to know the history and how many miles of pipelines the city is respondsible for. Focus on what area is being shu customer it is for repairs. 3. 4. Element 2 Organization 1.Paragraphs are choppy and don’t flow logically Paragraphs 1, and 3 should be p 2.Paragraph 2 has too much going on. Start with when shut-off will beg help prepare for water being shu 3. 4. Element 3 Development 1. Paragraph 2 main point is fuzzy. “Shut-off will start at 9 on Augus and day should always be put to
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