Essay Issues - crusades and Jerusalem.ppt

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Unformatted text preview: Essay Issues Crusades vs. Present Day Introduction You must retain the steps from essay to essay for the introduction. Introduction You MUST follow the steps for the thesis. You cannot get the thesis point if you use broad terminology such as: causes, effects, political, economic and social. YOU CANNOT USE THESE WORDS BY THEMSELVES! Choose groupings based on distribution of documents (3 = modern era 5 = Crusades) Sample Thesis The Crusades, which began in approximately 1050, and the current conflict in Jerusalem have both impacted the Middle East negatively. This conflict is illustrated through: the religious causes and effects of the Crusades, land struggles post-Crusades and failed attempts at peace by outside groups. Sample Thesis The Crusades, which began in approximately 1050, and the current conflict in Jerusalem have both impacted the Middle East negatively. This conflict is illustrated through: the religious causes of the Crusades, political effects of the Crusades and failed attempts at peace by outside groups. Bias You can say this document is not biased because it is a map simply showing where the Crusades were fought. Balfour -> British had political and economic interests in the land. Clinton -> US president, member of UN UN -> created after the Holocaust POV AND BIAS ONE AT A TIME!!!!!!!!! FACTS CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER! OSI is the framework for the essay. The documents support your OSI. FACTS This essay shows who truly did the work on the mock UN and who did not. You You cited DOCUMENTS IN YOUR SPEECH! knew the essay topic, you should have studied the facts. Don’t forget your OSI – FEUDALISM (HELLO?!) Missing Voice Saying “the people of the religion are needed” makes no sense Are Be the leaders of the faiths aliens? specific Example: Yasser Arafat Balance Your facts should have been balanced between the Crusades and the present situation. Body 1 - 5 sentences OSI: Middle Ages, Crusades Body 2 - 5 sentences OSI: why sacred to religions/effects of Crusades Body 3 - 5 sentences OSI: Holocaust modern situation BEFORE EACH DOC 2-5 SENTENCES OF OSI Timing Better to finish and get a 7. Do not stress yourself out over this, you waste more time stressing! Beware of bold statements “The Christians do not fight today over Jerusalem.” “The Jews are entitled to the land today.” “Christians are neutral today.” “The Zionists do nothing to ease the tensions they just add to it.” Use your English skills “Gotten” Do not use this if you do not live in England Conclusion Minimally write your thesis if you run out of time. In order to get the thesis point you need to have your thesis in your conclusion and introduction. Partial Essay Re-Write The next slide is to practice the same topic via a comparative essay model (old essay). Name : __________________________ APWH – Miss Buffalino Middle Ages Test Boost This assignment will count as a test grade. Complete test corrections for all of the MC questions that you got wrong. Complete this task on loose-leaf. STAPLE it to this handout. Write the question, correct answer and state why it is the correct answer. (10pts) Re-write your thesis. EVEN IF YOU RECEIVED FULL CREDIT! DO NOT COPY YOUR ORIGINAL THESIS OVER! Create a new thesis. In order to receive these points you must include all of the components for the thesis and follow the directions! Underline the date and highlight the similarity(ies) in one color and the difference(s) in another color. (10pts) ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ For each similarity and or difference mentioned in the thesis write out the reason why each similarity or difference occurred. Similarity or Difference #1 - _______________________ REASON: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (5pts) Similarity or Difference #2 - _______________________ REASON: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (5pts) Similarity or Difference #3- _______________________ REASON: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (5pts) ...
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