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Unformatted text preview: issues that anyone, with a scientific background or not, would like to learn more about. It also highlights the key points that the author wants to convey to the reader. However, there are some weaknesses in the paper. While I was reading through the paper, I found some of the ideas to be presented in a rather disorganized fashion. One such example is when Regenstein discusses animal behavior in the wild. The information discussed should have been put in the in the introductory paragraph in that section, rather than be randomly placed in the middle. The ideas did not flow and I couldn’t draw a connection between how previous paragraph tied into animal behaviors and what constitutes natural and normal behavior. See Attached Paper for More Suggestions....
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- Fall '07
- 21st century, Rhetorical question