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13.2 Radical Rewrite: Inadequate Cover LetterList at least eight weaknesses1 The cover letter was not address to anyone. Isabella should have identified the hiring agent if possible.2 Her introduction did not sound encouraging. Isabella should have open with a line that would really grip the reader. For example, she should have jump right in to and tell the company why they should hireher and talk about her work experience.3 The main body of the cover letter should give some detailed example of her experiences from her

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