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Unformatted text preview: unfair to take it for granted that any achievement in any field is more important than life. � *?B 6 . p9 o * right answer to this question. 2 erpetual ` ’W &B6 collectively and? objectively evaluate a person by * considering both the faults and the achievements rather than by claiming one of the two is more important than the other. 2 3 Optional words: Greatness/extraordinary/ outstanding/ supreme Success/ achievement/ accomplishment/ attainment Thesis sentence: in most cases, a great achievement that one gains in certain field is more notable than the faults he has ever made. However, that does necessarily mean that the former is more important than the later. Moreover, it is severely biased to praise people’s achievements without even a glance on their faults. View1: Is almost undoubted that we can not eliminate people’s achievements just because they have made some faults. Likewise, we can not neglect people’s faults when they achieve greatness in certain fields. Evidence: V...
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This note was uploaded on 05/05/2009 for the course ECAS asdfasdf taught by Professor Asdfaf during the Spring '09 term at Academy of Art University.
- Spring '09