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Journal Article Critique ofThe Crack in the Electric WindowIn the paper,The Crack in the Electric Window,Charles Acland wrote a synopsis of anarticle written by Marshall McLuhan called,Understanding Media: The Extensions of Man.Inhis paper Acland focus seemed to be on viewers being screens. In Acland’s paper there are goodexamples of grammar usage, as well as some negative qualities.In his paper Ackland effectively use tenses. For example, in the sentence “Film can be backprojected, video can be front-projected, and both were being done for years prior to …”(Ackland) the wordwereis a “be verb” showing past tense. In addition, in the sentence “Alimitation of shoots involving computer generated images is the separation …” (Ackland),shootsis in first person singular with an –ssuffix making it in the present tense. It is important tomake sure that when authoring a formal paper to use the proper tense. If there are to many tense

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Term
Fall
Professor
MICHAELA.BABCOCK
Tags
Ode, Grammatical tense, prepositional phrase

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