01_14_05_final_draft_worksheet.rtf - Final Draft Worksheet Using your narrative story first draft complete the following steps to revise your writing

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Final Draft Worksheet Using your narrative story first draft, complete the following steps to revise your writing. Voice 1. Read your story and identify the voice you are using. In one or two sentences, describe how you want your voice to sound . I want to sound a bit sad at the beginning, but nearing the end I want to sound happy. 2. Based on your description, identify two ways you can improve your writing to make this voice more clearly in your story. Her mother Ceres began letting the crops die, and allowing the animals, as well as villagers go hungry as a result of her grief. Then at the end her mother finally is able to see her daughter months later, and she comes to learn her daughter has fallen in love with her captor and is happy. Her mother accepts it and visits every so often to check up on her and goes back to caring to the crops. Word Choice 3. Paste one paragraph that you feel could use more interesting word choice below. Revise it with more vivid wording. Pay particular attention to places where you might switch to more
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