Week 6, topic 10
One weakness of this white paper is its grammar and mechanics. It has numerous grammatical
errors. Examine the
Introduction
. Locate the sentence fragment. Rewrite the fragment so that it is a
complete sentence.
In my reading of the white paper clinical burnout, beginning with the introduction, the first grammatical
error that I pick out is (Burnout; physical or mental collapse caused by overwork or stress), I felt like the
student was defining Burnout and I think it would have been better written in this format (Burnout can
be defined as physical or mental collapse due to overwork or stress in the work place)
2. Examine the
Previous Approaches
section. Locate at least two word form errors. Rewrite the
sentences in which the errors occur, but with the correct word forms.
-With this sentence, I also noted that, the word effects should have been affects. So instead of it reading
this way, (With more than half of our clinicians and executives experiencing some form of burnout, one
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