Copy of Extended Memoir Peer Editing Packet.pdf

Copy of Extended Memoir Peer Editing Packet.pdf - Memoir...

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Memoir Peer-Editing Packet Today’s Date: __________________ Your Name:Luke McFaul Your partner’s name: Ayaan Rahim Directions: Read your partner’s memoir and highlight the appropriate responses below. Fill out this packet in its entirety with comments in each section. Make sure your comments are constructive. Then provide a “grade” for your partner at the end. 1. Introduction Very Good. The subject is introduced with rich sensory details. Good, but improvement needed. The subject is introduced, but more details are needed to create a clear image in the reader’s mind. Needs improvement. There are not enough clear details to create an image in the reader’s mind about the writer’s subject. Comments: I really like the short exclamation comments that set the scene. 2. Background Information There are enough background details to explain how the subject is important to the writer, and there is a smooth progression of experiences or events.
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  • Fall '14
  • EthanHalte
  • Writing, Style, partner, Narrative mode, grammar errors

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