Dear Maria,Great work on the thesis statement. Giving us a little information about the artist.Your introduction paragraph does give us an overview of the artwork.There was no physical context for the piece. If this piece was viewed online, canyou describe your initial thoughts or if it was viewed in person descriptive writing wouldhelp describe the physical context.I did notice you did provide a list of elements he used. Words like: detailedpatterns, intricate shapes, helped reveal the criteria you used for your analysis and
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