ENG-105: Module 7 Writing Self-Review Assignment Name: Teandrea Watson Commentary Essay Topic: Impact of ADHD on a Child’s Schooling Commentary Essay Thesis Statement: In the education system today, children who have been diagnosed with ADHD often face difficulty while in school. Those children often have problems with interaction with their fellow classmates while in school and also have difficulties paying attention to what is being taught in the classroom. Please write a minimum of 100 words for each of the three questions below, describing the progress you have made in your writing. Make sure you proofread your self-review before submitting. 1 What changes or improvements did you make to your commentary essay rough draft? Identify specific parts of your paper that you revised. Why did you make these changes to your rough draft? (100 words minimum) After receiving feedback from the professor, I read my rough draft over again and realized that she was correct. I was writing on what educators can do to help those
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