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After Action Essay Per the rubric for essay number two, I did an outstanding job on my essay. I showed exemplary skills on purpose and audience. I engaged the readers with an original approach to my subject. I showed exemplary skills in thesis and support. My thesis statement was original and I had evidence to back it up. The organization and style was also exemplary. My writing flowed smoothly and it contained everything an essay needs, which is the introduction, body, and conclusion. The language of my paper was precise and the voice of my paper was active. All the quotes and paraphrased material I used was properly documented and cited. The formatting throughout my essay was also exemplary. Unfortunately, there was a part in my essay that was not up to par. The section that was under developed was the grammar and mechanics section. I realized that I should proofread my easy and that would have eliminated some of the errors I made throughout my essay. One thing that I was corrected on, was my usage of commas. I thought I used the commas correctly throughout my essay but there

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