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Proposal Response1 - Topic Proposal Response Worksheet Name...

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Topic Proposal Response Worksheet Name of Responder (you): Eli Quinn Name of Writer (whose paper are you responding to?): Nathan Thompson Introduction. Identify the two sentences that best engage you with the proposal’s topic or that best explain why it’s an important area of research (cut and paste them): -“What are steroids used for?” -“The past few years have brought on the usage of steroids to an all new high.” Identify two sentences that needs work (cut and paste them): -“College sports may have keep a low profile but consider this:” -“He ask many question with a broad variety of topic all any issue dealing with steroids.” Provide alternative versions of them that might work better here (revise them): -College sports may have kept a low profile but consider this: -He asks many questions dealing with a variety of topics about steroids. Thesis. Identify what you think is the proposal’s thesis here: -“As pro baseball is going through its saga of steroids, college sports have tried to keep a low profile.” Describe what already works about the thesis. -It puts the argument out there about college sports using steroids and why aren’t those cases
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This note was uploaded on 03/27/2008 for the course ENG 101 taught by Professor Cornett during the Winter '08 term at N.C. State.

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